Significance? How does this idea relate to the main idea in your paragraph? Related Issues:

Make sure that every idea in your paragraph is related to the main idea expressed in your paragraph's topic sentence. Often times, when we are writing a rough draft, we can go off on an interesting theme which may be very interesting but is unrelated to your argument. 

Either cut the sentence or find a better way to work it into your paragraph. Perhaps this idea warrants a paragraph of its own.

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